Monday, 13 April 2009

OG 11 : VR : 43 : Josephine Baker

To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, and she remained in France during the Second World War as a performer and an intelligence agent for the Resistance

A. To Josephine 
Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate
B. For 
Joshephine baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, paris was her home
C. 
Joshephine baker made Paris her home long before to be an expatriate was fashionable expatriate
D. Long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Josephine 
Baker made Paris her home
E. Long before it was fashionable being an expatriate, Paris was home to Josephine 
Baker


Two sentence have been coordinated with "and" , and the second sentence has a pronoun "she" . The
construction making Josephine subject will be preferred.

In a A and B , her is redundant.

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