The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month.
(A) world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month
(A) world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month
in that = overly formal and out-dated.
(B) world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festival’s month
(B) world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festival’s month
Its not clear who would be doing the proclaiming ?
(D) world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during the month of the festival
OK
(D) world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during the month of the festival
OK
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